To twinkle like a star, heat isn't enough. One needs to travel distances too.
How about just: To twinkle like a star, brilliance is not enough; be ready to travel far too.The metaphor is not coming across with phrases like 'heat' and 'travel distances'. Taken the 'bright' connotation of brilliance.- Jayprasad Hegde
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How about just: To twinkle like a star, brilliance is not enough; be ready to travel far too.
The metaphor is not coming across with phrases like 'heat' and 'travel distances'. Taken the 'bright' connotation of brilliance.
- Jayprasad Hegde
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